what I've noticed

on here, as I'm just casually browsing through the "latest" section of the audio portal, I realize that alot of shit people make without any implementation of talent, somehow end up with high ratings, and those who put thought into their work and produce a wonderful end result don't get the ratings/feedback they deserve

so here, this was great :D

master it

hmm, it would sound nice if you worked on mastering it properly, I think you used zeta+ for the main LFO, try lowering the cutoff and nixing the reverb, you want a sharp lead, rather than something with collateral trailing reverb.
otherwise great idea!